Marking Feedback

Production of Magazine	Complete?	Comments
Conventions of magazines used Masthead? Feature story? Sell lines? Price? Barcode? Main image/range of images?	No	Some features missing Main image is effective Masthead title perhaps needs to be more specific?
Font Reflects audience? Reflects purpose? Readable?	Some	The font does reflect your target audience through colour and type but it is slightly hard to read.
Sell lines Clear? Grammatically correct? Appropriate to task? Sufficient number?	Some	Punctuation needs correcting Some good sell lines which are engaging Need more to reflect conventions
Photos Framed a shot including and excluding elements as appropriate? Used a range of shot distances? Shooting material appropriate to task? Considered mise en scene- lighting, colour, model, objects and setting? Manipulate photo through cropping and resizing? Photos are good quality?	Some	Shots framed well- the contents page photo is particularly good. Mise en Scene considered and photos are of a good quality Missing: Range of shot distances Range of photos
Layout Follows convention of a magazine? Content evenly spaced? Photos and font blend well together	Some	Font colours and photo colour blend nicely Contents page layout does not follow conventions Front cover begins to – and what is there is good- but it feels unfinished
House style Colours reflect purpose? House style used throughout? Fonts matched well? Pictures reflect brand?	Some	House style established Some colours used throughout Fonts are similar on both pages Not enough variety in photos to reflect brand
Student Comments: I will be: Correcting my punctuation. Adding more photos and Shot angles. Reflect conventions in my work.